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You knew it was coming. - Lucius Fyre - 11-21-2014
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What can I do better, considering I have high school to take care of as well?
You knew it was coming. - Vincent Lane - 11-21-2014
As you will undoubtedly hear from many women throughout your life - you need more length.
It's hard to develop a compelling story in only a paragraph or two, you know? Also, if you want to compete with the best here, you'll need to show up more. Especially if you stick with smaller roleplays.
Best picbase ever though.
re:You knew it was coming. - Lucius Fyre - 11-21-2014
To Frodo: I tried that and will try again in the next rp. I use a Surface tablet, so it's a matter of which one I wanna use that day.
To Loverboy: I have been trying typing on my school given iPad at lunch, so length shouldn't be a problem anymore. Also, "They're only noodles, Michael."