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Feedback on latest RP - Jason E Smith - 05-21-2013
http://xwf1999.com/showthread.php?tid=2894&pid=9513#pid9513
Thoughts on latest RP ^^
Feedback on latest RP - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 05-21-2013
I feel like we are learning more and more about your character which is good. I like the idea of it being on the radio, sort of.... As you know by now I love description and of course a radio broadcast does not allow that. I think you should have described the way in which your character was speaking more.... but good work!